week 1 student work review -

critique points

• terminator shape unclear

• no sense of what is most important, what should we look at first

• while he used ideas and techniques discussed in week 1, he has not grasped the importance of showing the most important elements first

  

• many elements are all high saturation, making it impossible for us to be drawn to any certain areas, viewers don't know what they're supposed to be looking at

• lacking greys, all colours are highly saturated

  

• overuse of environment lighting (reflection/sunlight) causing viewer's confusion as to what the original colour of the material actually is

krenz edited version

• our order of viewing elements within the image becomes more comfortable

• we are now drawn to the eyes first (because of the high saturation iris)

• after the eyes we'll notice the shape of the areas in shadow and the shapes of strong highlights

  

when drawing diffused sky light in shadows, use greys, but don't make it too blue, this causes the hair to actually seem like it has patches of blue